tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5269033418256320088.post2310148968793433244..comments2023-08-29T07:47:18.658-07:00Comments on ChristopherB2017: Summary and Response to "Machines are Using Us"Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00073320980769935658noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5269033418256320088.post-62002818354565358472013-10-31T07:57:53.983-07:002013-10-31T07:57:53.983-07:00Excellent summary. very clear and articulate. Wor...Excellent summary. very clear and articulate. Work on eliminating personal words.<br /><br />With your response, let's work on using stronger verb choices. Rather than saying, " Michael Wesch’s “Machines are Using Us” is correct in saying that machines are using us because every time somebody searches a funny video on youtube the machine keeps it in that person’s histor", let's say " Michael Wesch’s “Machines are Using Us” correctly illustrates that machines are using society because every time somebody searches a funny video on YouTube, the machine stores that person’s history"<br />10<br /><br />Good extensions in your examples to support what you are sayingAnne K. Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04110214058375361749noreply@blogger.com